Saturday, November 8, 2008
2008 End-Of-Year English Composition
well ..
I have nothing to post about ..
and I'm REALLY bored now ..
so
I just wanna type out my End-of-Year English Composition ..
Tell me what you think about it ^^
(note: i tried to do the correction ..if theres any mistake, please tell me!><)
Here goes! :
The girl at the park was the kindest girl I had ever met. She would help the elderly to the benches and play with the little children. The girl have the same age as me and she lived around the neighbourhood.
One day, when I was still a kid, I often played on the monkey bars. Due to the word ' monkey ', I would climb the bars swinging from one end to the other. Climbing from the bottom to the top of the bars and walking like a trapist. Unfortunately, I fell down from the top and gave a loud thud. My ankle was sprained and I was on the verge of unconciouness. I felt someone massaging my ankle and then wraping it with bandages. When my mind was clear, the first thing that greeted me was the white bandage on my andkle and the sweet scent of the girl. It seemed that she gave me some treatment. Till then, I would never forget her kindness.
Few years later, I got into the same class as her and learnt that her name was Sue. She was the model student of the year and the top student in my class. She was the most kindest and prettiest student in the class and would make any man's heart throb. Unlike all the other boys who were chasing her, I was only aiming to repay her kindness.
Until one day, I was able to help her. It was raining cats and dogs. The rain was pouring down onto the floor and the raindrops were dancing on the ground. On my way back home, I found Sue laying on the ground, clutching her right ankle. She was soaking wet and was moaning in pain. I ran up to her and offered my help. She was persistant and said she was fine. As she tried to stand, she would fall over again and again.
Evantually, I was begining to be annoyed by the constant ' fall down ' scene and squatted infront of her and said, " You shouldn't push yourself. It'll only make it worse. So just get on my back now."
Fortunately, she took my advice and got on my back. It was a twenty minute walk to our neighbourhood. Usually, I was a little weak but I would not fail her at a time like that. As soon as I brought Sue to her doorstep, I put her down as gently as I could and helped her to her feet. She apologised for being persistant before and wanted to repay me back. I told her that she had already did and then we parted ways.
As I walked back to my house, I felt a sense of accomplishment as I finished my mission of repaying her kindness.
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THE END !!
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should I continue the story?
hahaha!
lols ..
I think I should! ..
but maybe not now ..
(remind me to continue the story ..
kay?)
alright !!
...
lets see ..
for today ..
I feel:
VERY ANNOYED !!
why:
'cause I'm annoyed by my sister ..
Reason:
Whatever lie I say : she gets angry and annoyed.(obvious)
Whatever truth I say: she gets anygry and annoyed.
She would (kinda?) force me to do something ..
and I can't freakin' talk back!
I can never talk back to her!!
BECAUSE SHE IS OLDER, BIGGER, SMARTER THAN ME!!!
.......
this sucks!!
in so damn many ways !!
ok ..
I gotta go lo ..
later she sees this ..
NOTE !!
THIS IS CONFIDENTIANAL !!
NEVER TELL MY FAMILY MEMBERS ABOUT THIS !!
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god damn ..
ok ..
*sigh*
hope to meet up soon !!
mata ..